Peter+Jeffery+and+Youngmin

Group grade Peter Jeffrey Youngmin • completion 10/10 • aesthetics (style) 5/5 • aesthetics (error free) 5/5 • cartoon 5/5 • advertisement 5/5 • peer evaluation 4/5 group grade 34/35 20/25 Initiative- Peter this is more like an editorial. You are stating that the law should be spread nation wide, so your job is to write that law, what would it say? Interview: Excellent but don’t use AND to start a sentence 24/25 Editorials Peter excellent, realistic 25/25 Jeffrey well written in general but some mistakes 24/25 Event Censorship Board: Try to give an exact date not just 1907 and do not start sentences with AND 24/25 Yongmin Legislation: Jeffery Date the amendment was ratified? Some bad word choices i.e. “messes up” The article is not written very clearly. Also you example of the bridge builder doesn’t fit in. 19/25