Ilwon,+Hojun,+Stephanie

Group grade: Hojun, Ilwon, Stephanie • completion 10/10 • aesthetics (style) 5/5 • aesthetics (error free) 5/5 • cartoon 5/5 • advertisement 5/5 • peer evaluation 4/5 group grade 34/35 United Coal Miner’s Strike excellent, but one typo 24/25 Stephanie Prohibition: good article but make sure everything is written is the present tense it sounds like you are writing something that has happened long ago. Also it is important to note when the amendment was signed into law. This is not clear. 23/25 Ilwon Initiative, this was explained as the one thing you are supposed to make up. A proposal to fix a social problem, not to report on a group. 17/25 Hojun editorial Hojun what is the 17th amendment, what does it do? Are you for or against it? Proof read your work, the U.S. Constitution is a document it cannot decide anything. 16/25 Stephanie excellent argument 25/25 Interview: very good but what about questions regarding what business practices she exposed in her book? A question about this would have made the interview much stronger. 24/25 Ilwon