Yohee,+Jinssoo,+Roger

Group grade: JINSOO, Yoohee, and roger • completion 10/10 • aesthetics (style) 5/5 • aesthetics (error free) 5/5 • cartoon 4/5-why are they drawn like amoeba’s? • advertisement 5/5 • peer evaluation 4/5 group grade 33/35 Individual Grades Coal Strike – Jinsoo I like the table you put in, are those the actual terms of the settlement of the strike, some parts of the article were confusing to read. You said that the strike was put down by the National Guard, but then you say there was a compromise, sounds like your missing something here 23/25 Initiative: how is this an example of an initiative? what law are you proposing to fix a problem? Did you look at the examples of initiatives I linked on the wiki? Roger 18/25 17th amendment- this amendment allowed for the direct election of senators to the federal government. Each state has two senators who are elected by popular vote. The second half of your article is better, the first half is unclear. You also have to work on grammar, I regularly see big grammar mistakes in your writing. 20/25 Yoohee Interview excellent interview, responses reflect content knowledge 25/25 Jinsoo Editorials instructions clearly stated to write opposing views about the same topic Roger: good article but see comment above 23/25 Yoohee try to keep things more simple, everyone knows what senators are, you are confusing yourself, how can they be part of the lower House of Representatives and the Upper House of congress? I don’t understand what your point is about the 19th Amendment 19/25