Shinhee+Brian+Tiffany

Group grade: Tiffany, Brian, Shinhee • completion 10/10 • aesthetics (style) 5/5 • aesthetics (error free) 5/5 • cartoon 4/5 • advertisement 5/5 • peer evaluation 4/5 group grade 33/35 Individual grade hurricane: 19 lots of typos and grammar mistakes PROOFREAD Tiffany Food and Drug: good work just some minor errors 24/25 Brian Editorial Pro: Shinhee it is your job to argue in first person, not report on the Pure Food and Drug Act, that also needs to be capitalized in the paper. Finally, the topic being debated needs to be in the head-line 21/25 Editorial Con- Tiffany The topic being debated needs to be in the head-line. You make a decent argument at the end but you should focus the whole article about making your point. Finally you should write this in the present tense as if it were happening now. 21/25 Initiative-This does not look like an initiative, why didn’t you e-mail me for help? I have no idea what the issue is or how you are prosing to solve it. 17/25 SHINHEE Interview: good interview minor errors in typing 24/25 BRIAN